A THANK-YOU NOTE
Dear parents,
Thank you very much for the mobilephone for my birthday. I love it, because it's very beautiful. Also I need it.
I had a fantastic day. My grandmother's present was incredible. She gives me a book. My aunt gives me a amazing DVD movie. In the ivening my friends and I went to the cinema, later we went a Japonese restaurant. Then we used a mobilephone, it is fantastic!
I am looking forward to seeing you at the summer.
Love,
Laia
Thank you very much for the mobilephone for my birthday. I love it, because it's very beautiful. Also I need it.
I had a fantastic day. My grandmother's present was incredible. She gives me a book. My aunt gives me a amazing DVD movie. In the ivening my friends and I went to the cinema, later we went a Japonese restaurant. Then we used a mobilephone, it is fantastic!
I am looking forward to seeing you at the summer.
Love,
Laia
Good job, but be careful with the PAST SIMPLE, 6.5/10
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